Poetry: All She Wanted
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I know the anguish that you feel,
The burden you bear, you do conceal.
To me you once did confide,
And now your feelings you would hide?
I wait here patient for your reply,
You did not write, I wondered why?
You know I'm here if you should call,
Whatever you need, I'd give my all.
I hope your anger's not with me,
The words I said you disagreed?
I know you do not want to hear,
"He's not the one, is that your fear?"
I know this man's your heart's desire,
I know the glow he sets afire,
But can he give you what you yearn for?
What is this price in return for?
Please don't be mad at what I say,
It's all for you that I do pray,
If you're really happy now,
I accept that, I will some how.
Just remember that I love you,
I always will whatever you do.
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That hit home...nice...:O) Hugs G-Ma
A heartyposem that -with its strong emotion and controlled expresson, powerfully expresses the love of a sincere wife to her beloved.
Feelings are sensitive.
It also clearly tells the sarrows a person is having in his mind, and wife's understanding of that.This is a situation where words are of less use but just a touch is more soothing.
I suggest you try to moderate this poem.
It can be definetely improved.
Absolutely beautiful; moving;lovely and sensitive; I too, love poetry, but mine is a mix of abstract/prose and I do not share it with the masses. YOU need to publish a book of your poems. They are that GOOD.










Mentalist acer Level 6 Commenter 2 years ago
A memorable poem...